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Harpy Lullaby Sample page by ~pinkjellyo:iconpinkjellyo:


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Submitted: May 8
File Size: 847 KB
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Resolution: 600×833
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Sample page from my manga "Harpy Lullaby" athro for Sonny.

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~blueaorta:iconblueaorta: 6 days 23 hours ago
the textures you can get out of plain black and white are always incredible; most artists who texture so much lose the stark contrast. your stuff is gorgeous.
*ColdCutDragon:iconColdCutDragon: 6 days 22 hours ago
ahh it looks so good!

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EH! bollocks!
~Enpu2:iconEnpu2: 6 days 22 hours ago
Wow. Beautiful!

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Friday night in the Kingdom of Dooooooom.
~KuRoMONo:iconKuRoMONo: 6 days 22 hours ago
kya~
soo pretty~

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Take a look at my gallery...
nyuu~ >w<
~ifan80:iconifan80: 6 days 21 hours ago
wo hoo
nice artwork

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:jedi: Mae the force be with u :jedi:
*wytherwing:iconwytherwing: 6 days 15 hours ago
well done! :thumbsup:

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~kill the king when love is the law~
~Sorein703:iconSorein703: 6 days 15 hours ago
Impressive details and realism, you're skillfull as usual
Very Good page :D
~Rabbitdreamer:iconRabbitdreamer: 6 days 13 hours ago
Beautiful! I want to see/read more.
~tonyguaraldibrown:icontonyguaraldibrown: 6 days 11 hours ago
great drawing and inking. the text is a little awkward, (god i hope i don't sound like an ass, i really do like your work, so i just try to give you my best critiques) Your first word box is to big, i can't see what is happening in the first and the second. Conventional wisdom says keep your word balloons and boxes inside the panel, otherwise the focus is to much on the text and not the art. The next two panels can be one long horizontal box along the top, there for I can see what is happening.

Text is one of the most underestimated elements of comics. The text should be so smooth and easy to read that it is almost invisible. The old school guys used to lay out their word balloons before they even started drawing, with that said, just think about your text while you are drawing so that you have enough negative space for your balloons and boxes.

thanks for sharing and keep it coming!